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nice disonance!

i really liked this melody and it'll probably be stuck in my head for a little while at least. i liked the movements in the song the most, although most people would probably think they were awkward (haha! i guess that means i have an ear!) it is true that the piano could be brought about more and not so dark, but it was still very nice, especially with that disonance. way to paint a picture man =) keep up the good work!

Bosa responds:

Thanks, I try my best to bring beauty to people's ears; giving them a picture of some sort and allowing them to come up with their own stories.

Something wrong, though. I didn't paint the picture.. you did, Jazzman.

-Bosa

nice track man

you obviously put some work into this, but just be careful with too much repetition or else it'll get a little boring really good tho =)

R0tt3n-Appl3 responds:

nigga please

there's something missing here...

i dunno, man...it just seems a little bit too empty to me...good song, indeed, and good fx, yes, but the sounds only want to cover just a corner of the whole picture, ya know what i mean? my suggestion is you try more layering, especially in your intro. it just didnt catch my attention right away and it didnt sound unique enough (it sounded like that other guy down the street could have copied and done the exact same thing in a matter of hours with no prob) good effort tho =)

Dj-GloStix responds:

Wasn't meant to sound unique, It was a build to the surprising part :) I just wanted to start like generic song while showing some strings and boom the song punches you in the face. :P

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Jonathan Doemel @mr-jazzman

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