there's something missing here...
i dunno, man...it just seems a little bit too empty to me...good song, indeed, and good fx, yes, but the sounds only want to cover just a corner of the whole picture, ya know what i mean? my suggestion is you try more layering, especially in your intro. it just didnt catch my attention right away and it didnt sound unique enough (it sounded like that other guy down the street could have copied and done the exact same thing in a matter of hours with no prob) good effort tho =)