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hey, that's my song!

since your my bro, i'll let you keep this up here. but, i do intend to make a new version of this song, and it won't sound so muffled. just be prepared for domination is all haha =). nice song, right?

i love it!

perfect, really. the strings sound really realistic, and the piano is wonderful. the bells at the beginning are so crisp, and i really love it how you transform the medley from two minor songs into two major ones. really good job.

holy shit!

this is quite weird, listening to this. usually i associate metal with halloween, and that's exactly what it sounds like: a merry halloween! extremely unique. the only thing is, you end the song kinda weird. why not add a breakdown or something?? fo shizzle, you could make it sound so much better and not so much like an alien invasion on christmas eve.

orgasmic!

this song is truly remarkable. i really love the contrasting motion that your melody takes as your bass hand descends. the i-VI-VII progression of the bass is absolutely beautiful, and the use of perfect intervals in between the sixth and seventh minors really gives this song an edge. oh yeah, and one more thing: those strings really add to your song and add to its dramatic appeal. 10/10 mate, 10/10!

woah...

sounds great man. looking forward to hearing more =~)!

But of COURSE!!!

hahaha! bro, this sounds so good. im so glad i got to record the guitar for this song. now let's finish this SOB before people start getting too angry that we didnt complete it ;~)!

R0tt3n-Appl3 responds:

lolz yes, let's get r dun. wtf kinda smiley is that?

this shit right here...

wow. really, just wow... thats tight. i dunno how else to put it man... cant wait till the final thing comes out!

Bleek989 responds:

LOL THX HOMIE YEA THE FINAL ISNT MUCH DIFF BUT YEA I THNK IMA POST IT PRLY TOMMORW THX FOR THA REVIEW

~1~

Wait a minute...

Yes, i do agree that this song is good. However, I'm almost dead positive that this was taken almost directly from a pre-made fl studio song. in other words, this isnt original...

cool

i like the sound of that cello (kinda reminds me of the bourne identity sound track). the harpsichord is also pretty neat, especially through its melodic progression. very unique. keep up the good work =~)

K-Dm responds:

thx for the review

K-Dm

Nice

I liked the timing of the drums quite a bit. The only thing is, though, they were a little weak. If you're planning on improving this song, add a few effects to your guitar and piano line so that they sound more graceful and not so mechanical. try to end it a little stronger, too; you start off with these rockin emotions, and then they just get tossed up in the air. in other words, try to end it with the guitar, using the piano as a sort of bridge to the final part. overall, this song was really unique. Keep it up! =)

Spoony18 responds:

Thanks, i was thinking the same thing but i didnt want to overload the song cause i thought i was doing good as it was. and usually in my songs i cut the song off at the end so i changed it to a softer piano. ill make a new version of it with a guitar ending and little stronger of drums. the thing is is that im not too good with effects n stuff so i might not change those. Overall, thank you for the review, you helped me out a lot.

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