mr-jazzman's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Revenge of the Nothing]

Nice

I liked the timing of the drums quite a bit. The only thing is, though, they were a little weak. If you're planning on improving this song, add a few effects to your guitar and piano line so that they sound more graceful and not so mechanical. try to end it a little stronger, too; you start off with these rockin emotions, and then they just get tossed up in the air. in other words, try to end it with the guitar, using the piano as a sort of bridge to the final part. overall, this song was really unique. Keep it up! =)

Spoony18 responds:

Thanks, i was thinking the same thing but i didnt want to overload the song cause i thought i was doing good as it was. and usually in my songs i cut the song off at the end so i changed it to a softer piano. ill make a new version of it with a guitar ending and little stronger of drums. the thing is is that im not too good with effects n stuff so i might not change those. Overall, thank you for the review, you helped me out a lot.

[Pure Soda]

Hey, this sounds familiar to me...

You know, when i first heard this song, i expected nothin but guitar, bass and drums. that TRUMPET hit me like nothing else; it really adds flavor to your song. The has a beat kinda like the reggae song i just produced today, and it sounds really good. I take my hat off to you: a 10/10!

[This is Halloween Speed Mix]

WTF Has Jack Been Smoking?!?!?!?!

Holy shitalking mushrooms!!!! This song was KARAZY!!!!! I felt like I was on a an acid trip or somethin. Interesting rendition of that classic song from that classic movie, good job =).

[The Stranger!]

Ha! Cool...

It's kinda interesting to see how your creations unfold over time isn't it? I listened to this song expecting to hear a complete difference in the quality between the improved one and this, and although its true that your second version is much better, this one immediately shows the mark of genius. I suppose that your chops have improved quite a bit, haven't they? =) well done for your first piece!

[Stick this in your pipe]

i salute you

those drums are phenomenal! and the guitars aren't too shabby either. i really gotta know how you produce this stuff, cuz im hurtin in the metal area right now. save me from the techno, i need stuff like this! =)

[(The Stranger)]

Gawd, that was tasty!!!!

Damn dude, that kicks some serious ass. Don't listen to anyone else: that is some seriously good stuff right there. Wish i could get guitars that sounded like THAT!!!! Nice work, dude!

[Grind Down]

hmm...

Interesting, but the guitar could've used a bit more edge, if you know what i mean (half your song is taken up by an 8-measure note, and the guitar solo is very redundant). Wish i could get drum sounds like that =P

[Avast (Redone)]

Interesting...VERY Interesting...

This is the kind of sound I'm looking for in metal. Nice solos. The only thing I must say is that the rythym is just a bit redundant. Much better than the first one though =). Reminds me of Metallica!

[Dark Age]

holy crap!!!

wow, i felt like i was blasted to middle earth or somethin! it just sounds so DEMONIC and MENACING! yeah, i just about pissed in my pants it was that good...i wish i had the capacity to make songs like this! the absolute POWER! muahahahahaha!!!!!

just one suggestion: don't make the choir so ringy; it was a little bit loud for my taste, but still really good

Bosa responds:

Yep. It takes good inspiration and mood to make a song like this, and I had both at the time. Good thing I did, or I would be spoon feeding zerovoters.

I'm looking forward to your next track, Jazzman. I hope inspiration comes your way.

-Bosa

[23 Tears]

nice disonance!

i really liked this melody and it'll probably be stuck in my head for a little while at least. i liked the movements in the song the most, although most people would probably think they were awkward (haha! i guess that means i have an ear!) it is true that the piano could be brought about more and not so dark, but it was still very nice, especially with that disonance. way to paint a picture man =) keep up the good work!

Bosa responds:

Thanks, I try my best to bring beauty to people's ears; giving them a picture of some sort and allowing them to come up with their own stories.

Something wrong, though. I didn't paint the picture.. you did, Jazzman.

-Bosa