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Ha! Cool...

It's kinda interesting to see how your creations unfold over time isn't it? I listened to this song expecting to hear a complete difference in the quality between the improved one and this, and although its true that your second version is much better, this one immediately shows the mark of genius. I suppose that your chops have improved quite a bit, haven't they? =) well done for your first piece!

i salute you

those drums are phenomenal! and the guitars aren't too shabby either. i really gotta know how you produce this stuff, cuz im hurtin in the metal area right now. save me from the techno, i need stuff like this! =)

Gawd, that was tasty!!!!

Damn dude, that kicks some serious ass. Don't listen to anyone else: that is some seriously good stuff right there. Wish i could get guitars that sounded like THAT!!!! Nice work, dude!

hmm...

Interesting, but the guitar could've used a bit more edge, if you know what i mean (half your song is taken up by an 8-measure note, and the guitar solo is very redundant). Wish i could get drum sounds like that =P

Interesting...VERY Interesting...

This is the kind of sound I'm looking for in metal. Nice solos. The only thing I must say is that the rythym is just a bit redundant. Much better than the first one though =). Reminds me of Metallica!

holy crap!!!

wow, i felt like i was blasted to middle earth or somethin! it just sounds so DEMONIC and MENACING! yeah, i just about pissed in my pants it was that good...i wish i had the capacity to make songs like this! the absolute POWER! muahahahahaha!!!!!

just one suggestion: don't make the choir so ringy; it was a little bit loud for my taste, but still really good

Bosa responds:

Yep. It takes good inspiration and mood to make a song like this, and I had both at the time. Good thing I did, or I would be spoon feeding zerovoters.

I'm looking forward to your next track, Jazzman. I hope inspiration comes your way.

-Bosa

nice disonance!

i really liked this melody and it'll probably be stuck in my head for a little while at least. i liked the movements in the song the most, although most people would probably think they were awkward (haha! i guess that means i have an ear!) it is true that the piano could be brought about more and not so dark, but it was still very nice, especially with that disonance. way to paint a picture man =) keep up the good work!

Bosa responds:

Thanks, I try my best to bring beauty to people's ears; giving them a picture of some sort and allowing them to come up with their own stories.

Something wrong, though. I didn't paint the picture.. you did, Jazzman.

-Bosa

nice track man

you obviously put some work into this, but just be careful with too much repetition or else it'll get a little boring really good tho =)

R0tt3n-Appl3 responds:

nigga please

there's something missing here...

i dunno, man...it just seems a little bit too empty to me...good song, indeed, and good fx, yes, but the sounds only want to cover just a corner of the whole picture, ya know what i mean? my suggestion is you try more layering, especially in your intro. it just didnt catch my attention right away and it didnt sound unique enough (it sounded like that other guy down the street could have copied and done the exact same thing in a matter of hours with no prob) good effort tho =)

Dj-GloStix responds:

Wasn't meant to sound unique, It was a build to the surprising part :) I just wanted to start like generic song while showing some strings and boom the song punches you in the face. :P

All you need is instant gratification. You desire nothing more. -Tesseract

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