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But of COURSE!!!

hahaha! bro, this sounds so good. im so glad i got to record the guitar for this song. now let's finish this SOB before people start getting too angry that we didnt complete it ;~)!

R0tt3n-Appl3 responds:

lolz yes, let's get r dun. wtf kinda smiley is that?

this shit right here...

wow. really, just wow... thats tight. i dunno how else to put it man... cant wait till the final thing comes out!

Bleek989 responds:

LOL THX HOMIE YEA THE FINAL ISNT MUCH DIFF BUT YEA I THNK IMA POST IT PRLY TOMMORW THX FOR THA REVIEW

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cool

i like the sound of that cello (kinda reminds me of the bourne identity sound track). the harpsichord is also pretty neat, especially through its melodic progression. very unique. keep up the good work =~)

K-Dm responds:

thx for the review

K-Dm

Nice

I liked the timing of the drums quite a bit. The only thing is, though, they were a little weak. If you're planning on improving this song, add a few effects to your guitar and piano line so that they sound more graceful and not so mechanical. try to end it a little stronger, too; you start off with these rockin emotions, and then they just get tossed up in the air. in other words, try to end it with the guitar, using the piano as a sort of bridge to the final part. overall, this song was really unique. Keep it up! =)

Spoony18 responds:

Thanks, i was thinking the same thing but i didnt want to overload the song cause i thought i was doing good as it was. and usually in my songs i cut the song off at the end so i changed it to a softer piano. ill make a new version of it with a guitar ending and little stronger of drums. the thing is is that im not too good with effects n stuff so i might not change those. Overall, thank you for the review, you helped me out a lot.

holy crap!!!

wow, i felt like i was blasted to middle earth or somethin! it just sounds so DEMONIC and MENACING! yeah, i just about pissed in my pants it was that good...i wish i had the capacity to make songs like this! the absolute POWER! muahahahahaha!!!!!

just one suggestion: don't make the choir so ringy; it was a little bit loud for my taste, but still really good

Bosa responds:

Yep. It takes good inspiration and mood to make a song like this, and I had both at the time. Good thing I did, or I would be spoon feeding zerovoters.

I'm looking forward to your next track, Jazzman. I hope inspiration comes your way.

-Bosa

nice disonance!

i really liked this melody and it'll probably be stuck in my head for a little while at least. i liked the movements in the song the most, although most people would probably think they were awkward (haha! i guess that means i have an ear!) it is true that the piano could be brought about more and not so dark, but it was still very nice, especially with that disonance. way to paint a picture man =) keep up the good work!

Bosa responds:

Thanks, I try my best to bring beauty to people's ears; giving them a picture of some sort and allowing them to come up with their own stories.

Something wrong, though. I didn't paint the picture.. you did, Jazzman.

-Bosa

nice track man

you obviously put some work into this, but just be careful with too much repetition or else it'll get a little boring really good tho =)

R0tt3n-Appl3 responds:

nigga please

there's something missing here...

i dunno, man...it just seems a little bit too empty to me...good song, indeed, and good fx, yes, but the sounds only want to cover just a corner of the whole picture, ya know what i mean? my suggestion is you try more layering, especially in your intro. it just didnt catch my attention right away and it didnt sound unique enough (it sounded like that other guy down the street could have copied and done the exact same thing in a matter of hours with no prob) good effort tho =)

Dj-GloStix responds:

Wasn't meant to sound unique, It was a build to the surprising part :) I just wanted to start like generic song while showing some strings and boom the song punches you in the face. :P

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