Good melody
I'm not gonna lie, I really like your stuff. It's got anti-typical melodies, and it's upbeat. The mix is also pretty damn good, which is something rare to find on NG. However, I think that your songs (in particular, this one) could benefit from a more unique SOUND altogether. IMO, the drums sound too generic, the synths are on the same order as most other techno songs on NG, and the transitions are predictable. When I review I song, I ask myself the question, "What does this song bring to the table that makes it memorable, or interesting?" Your melody is tremendously powerful, I like the inclusion of the piano, but it seems typical in other aspects (i.e., it doesn't include much else that makes it unique). However, this is not to say it's a bad song, because it's very nice - just not as epic or revolutionary as I had hoped. I will say that my favorite part of this entire song is the ending, where you hit the sixth intervals on the synths backed by the piano; that part sent a shiver down my spine, probably because of the way the synth blended with the ambience, very good stuff! =) But, as some advice, in your future tracks, don't be afraid to experiment with drums or synths that sound totally different from everyone else's because this is what gives you your niche as a producer. I think once you do this, you could become legendary man, no joke, because you have the same taste in melody that I do: One that plucks at the heartstrings of the audience, one that just naturally has a tendency to produce something cool, ya know? Overall good stuff, I enjoyed it - much more than most other songs in this genre, to be honest!
8/10
4/5
P.S. Just because I'm going experimental this round, don't expect me to let up man, this one is gonna be close! You're some excellent competition, which means I'm gonna have to give 100% if I want to progress. May the sonic rain be brought (if I can do that in a couple days lol)! ;)